Burst

Burst

A Poem by Suki Matsudai♥
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Definitely not the best i've done just an idea i had. Please review!!!!!! Thats what Im here for people making and receiving!!!!

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What if?
What if the  leaves on the trees were always the colors of the fall 
What if life never ended and music was the voice of the world.
What if we could fly and draw things to life.
What if you never lost anything, could have pizza for breakfast everyday, shrink to the size of a pea, dance on the moon, jump over Jupiter, and shine amongst the stars.
What if?
What if?
Asking that simple question creates possibilities that our minds could never create on their own. 
What if?
Magical lights and streams of florescent colors bloom from the Sun of your imagination and you ask yourself 
What if?

© 2011 Suki Matsudai♥


Author's Note

Suki Matsudai♥
Please dont be too harsh I kow its not good but i had an idea and i flowed with ti. REVIEWS WOULD BE HELPFUL!!!!!!!

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I think it is good. It has a nice idea and that's all that matters. But it's not one of my favorites.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 3, 2011
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Suki Matsudai♥
Suki Matsudai♥

Canton, OH



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I'm 15 I have another Writers but I'm using this one cause the other one was WAY too packed with poems :) I am a poet Im working on multiple novels that I fear Ill never finish. im also a singer/songw.. more..

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