Just a Dream

The ebony waters rush above my head

 like flames on an autumn night

Consuming me in the cold illusive grasp.

  Wrapping me in its eternal incandescence.

Dreams flood my mind as the raging blackness fills my lungs

Sandy shores caress the seams of my mind and rock the memories of my past.

Love forever engulfs me. My friend becomes my enemy

Lumière magique et amour éternel

magical light and eternal love 

destroy my body and release my soul to the skies

Creatures of the forests and the waters 

all kneel before the strength of Her power.

Luscious, pure, passionate waves,

 warm the soul once trapped within this weak impure form, 

safe from the destruction of man at last,

the elements surround in harmony

Spirit, Fire, Air, Water, Earth

swirling into the depths of an abyss 

as bright as the sun and as luminescent as the moon.

Nothing has ever been so beautiful,

 so perfect so real, ............

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I wish I'd never woken up.

Author's Note

what ya think?

Reviews

[♥ EmeraldHeart &..]

I really like this; I love how you put the little french thing in there.. But when you did that, I kinda wish you wouldn't have put the same thing twice. I already knew what it meant gosh ! lol. But I really love this piece!

[SpokenWord]

I believe when we dream our souls really leave our bodies and what we dream about is the adventure our soul is on. Thus some dreams seem so real when we wake up. In a way our bodies are destroyed at least in symbol as we leave them behind to explore the universe. I think your dream is grand, and scales outside the flesh into a world where only our souls can visit.

[Mary]

nice wording you really paint a picture, u sooo looked up words right? lol