Wonder

Feels as if there isn't a any spark nor fuel to unite the fire as is desired
As your shining I'm becoming less radiant blending into the background
I seek your happiness but doing so am losing mine only to gain what's lost
We're running towards a dead end instead of climbing to the top
Growing weak to understanding while losing a battle that's not being fought.

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Feels as if there isn't a any spark nor fuel to unite the fire as is desired
As your shining I'm becoming less radiant blending into the background "
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Intersting, short, and cool. Maybe change the title though, but overall, I like it.