The girl with the gift

The girl with the gift

A Story by Ko11

My name is Anna but some people call me the girl with the gift. No one told me that this gift was a curse and a blessing. This gift an save million of people life but one thing it could not do is save me . If I can not control this power of mine it will end my life like in a minutes. I only use it at home because I can control it there. My mother and grandmother work with me on contolling my powers. They teach me breathing exercises and shows painting techniques because they think that if I can relax my mind I can relax my body. They believe that you are the person could solve your problem. They are the only ones who know how to control it because they have power too. My mother can move this with her mind and time travel. My grandmother can bring death flowers back to life.
It would be crazy not to ask them for help.
After I long day in school I rush come home so that I can finish my homework and work on contolling my powers. I tossed my bag on the ground and start working on the homework because I want to start working on my powers. It usually takes about three hours to control my powers. Surprisingly, I have plan tonight with friend to go see this movie name Carrie. I do not want to save here all night perfecting on my powers because some times it gets so exhausting and boring.
I just want to take a break away from all the work I have been doing outside and inside of school. I thought that this is a good idea. I finish my homework and started working on my contolling powers because I know that if I do not get it right my granny would save practice make perfect so do it until you get it right. This is when I roll my eyes and say that don't I deserve a break from practing. My granny would say no. I would continue practing controlling my powers just end the conversation right now.
I practice controlling my power until it was 7:00 o'clock because the movie start at 7:00 o'clock p.m. I took a long shower and got dress for the movies. I wanted for my friends to call my cell to tell my mother that I heading to the movies. I jump in the car and they sped off like maniac. I thought that the cops were going to stop us because I thought that we ran a stop light. The cops did not stop so the driving was not that bad after all.
We got our tickets and we walk to our seats to watch the movie. When I saw the means girls of my school in the movie theater. They decided that it was a bright idea to sit right in front of us when we are watching the movie. I am likes super duper short so I can not see over people head because they are not transparent. When they sat in front of my was pissed over so I tried to counting to myself hoping that i do not use my powers because the movies is a public place. I do not know what I am going to do if I people see I use in front because there is nowhere to hide.
I am like telling myself that these breathing exercises need work because it is a make or break it situation. The breathing exercising was not work so I remove myself from the situation as possible. I know that if I would have stayed here that they would see my powers. I told my mother everything that happen here. I told my friend that I was not feeling well and said goodbye to them. When I heard one of the mean girls made a remark about me. When I completely lose it and...........


© 2016 Ko11


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Ko11
I hope you like what I have wrote as much as I do and check my other poems and stories.

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Well Miss K, here is my advice to you. It is good and I like the write, all it needs is some better words to make it flourish, try to unwrap the moments of what she is doing, I feel like you skip from one thing to another, place dialogue to extend it and strip segments into longer sentences. The thing is, that, this could be a good story if you dissect it and then explain those details. Ill keep reading your other writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ko11

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the criticism
This is cool. I love stories like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ko11

8 Years Ago

Thank you for this kind comment.
T.S. Sky

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)

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