The Letter

Dear Friends,

I know you don’t expect this and you all are probably trying to cope with all of this but I need you to do something for me. I need you to go to your email accounts and find a video I sent you, now this is video is important it will open up doors to a whole new adventure. All of the videos are basically the same expect the last word; these words must be played in order in the way I had set them. When these words are played in order it will unlock a number to a security box I have in my room. That will be where your adventure begins. With my funeral being today you might not think this is real but I must assure you this is as real as it gets. You will want to take this adventure because what is at the end of it will change your lives.

Sincerely,

Matt

P.S. I killed myself for my own reason I wasn’t going anywhere in life you all were this adventure is for you all not me I’m just the one who created it. Killing myself was the best option for me none of you might see it that why but I do. Good Luck

Author's Note

Word Count: 213

Reviews

[Blood.Red.Nobodies]

I like this introduction as to what is going on in the story. Have you ever read the book "Th1rteen R3asons Why" by Jay Asher? It seems a little bit like this. The girl in that story killed herself also and then she sent out 7 cassette tapes, each with a reason why she killed herself. If you have yet to read it, I highly recommend it. Getting back to your story, I like it except there are a few grammatical errors in it. I'm not sure if you meant it to be written like that, considering that this character named "Matt" is probably in a hurry to write this down. After "...find the video I sent you," I would put a period instead of the comma. In the last paragraph, after "P.S." I would make these changes: Period after "...for my own reason...", semicolon after "...I wasn't going anywhere in life...", period after "...you all were...", comma after "...adventure is for you all", period after "...not me...", period after "...best option for me...", and period after "Good luck". It may seem like a lot of changes but they were mostly grammatical so its not too big of a deal. I really love it, though. Keep on writing:)

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