A World Not So Perfect

what i think these are my thought and im ganna let them shine

You picture a world of peace

I picture a world of suffering

And you say that what I see is negative

But what I see is true

While you sit and think of a world so perfect

I'll sit and see it's imprefections

And when you come to me and say theres nothing wrong

My history will show and tell you a story of a man

Who ran the Nazi Party and kill the Jews and many more

And when you say that it wont happen agian

Ill show you time and time agian when it did

The world and the people walking it have major flaws

Murder and Rape happen all the time

So next time when you talk of a world so perfect

Think of what you mean and then maybe you might realize

Your mind cant even picture such a ridiculoes thing

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[Rae]

This is a perfect poem about the imperfect imperfections of this imperfect world. Good job, keep writing!

[Ryan Gonzalez]

I like how the entire poem sounds like a conflict between two people. Towards the end of the poem I like how it appears that the more negative one is winning, but doesn't necessarily say they have won this "Debate" because in the second-last line it says that "Maybe you might realize" instead of saying they do realize. Anyways, it's a lovely poem, so keep it up!

[2Real2BTrue]

This poem has a very raw perspective, and it's so true, some people desperately need to believe that everything is perfect, especially when it's not. Nice job =)

[dreaming dame]

Sad but true. wonderfully put though. :)

[Arianna]

i know :)

[Knoxxeh]

haha well its not a lie its true lol

[Arianna]

:) and you say im the negative one:)