Girl With The Healing Smile

This is not mine it was created by my best friend and since he dosnt have a Writers Cafe i thought i would put it on mine and show you his amazing poem

Her smile can make me happy in the darkest of moments,
It brings me memories of endless joys, with few laments.
It makes any dull day full of excitement and happiness,
I’m so grateful that I get to gaze upon her beautiful smile; my love for her is boundless.

Those lips, I went crazy the first time we kissed,
They make my heart race when they meet mine, I can’t resist.
No other can even compare to the way she makes me feel,
That beautiful smile, it has the power to heal.

Those eyes, vivid pools of tender beauty,
I could stare at them forever, when she leaves, I miss them dearly.
Sometimes I have to pinch myself to make sure this is real,
That beautiful smile, it has the power to heal.

That hair, as soft as silk, is a marvel in itself,
I run my fingers through it and I can barely contain myself.
The smile she brings me, I cannot conceal,
That beautiful smile, it has the power to heal.

That beautiful smile, it healed me,
Of the heartache I was suffering for so long,
It gave me a place where I felt I could belong.
My heart, torn to pieces, I almost couldn’t endure,
Your beautiful smile, it was the only cure.

Author's Note

this is not mine but i would love to hear reviews on it :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a powerful and beautiful description of love. Love support to be like what was written in these words. I like the gentle emotion and desire of the writer. It is a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[M.Babu]

This was a word perfect stanza!!

"Those eyes, vivid pools of tender beauty,
I could stare at them forever, when she leaves, I miss them dearly.
Sometimes I have to pinch myself to make sure this is real,
That beautiful smile, it has the power to heal."

There's a monstrously cute image of her and her lovely smile. I'd love to see it:) Amazingly written

[dreaming dame]

WOW!!! That was sooo sweat! I absaloutly adore it!