The Advise For The Suicidal Ones

my advise i gave to a friend that went very depressed once

One of my friends one day

Said that they were done

They couldnt take it anymore

I gave them some advise

This is what i said

 

You know the world is a fucked up place it really is

There are messed up things such as murder and rape

But, if you can look past that

You might be able to see the good in the world to

Such as family, friends, and maybe even love

And of cource at some point

The good things might hurt you

But know this

It happens to everyone

Its a part of life

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, this speaks to the masses in general with an encouraging messege
that flows with passion and real design to ponder, the feature that brings
your words to life is the clarity, works to create an image that the
reader can easily identify with, the actual meaning is true and
holds much weight, overall awsome job, i'm sure this poem helped
your friend with the perspective it lends the reader.

[AllieRose]

Yay :) I loves it