Our Brightest Light (Restored)

Our Brightest Light (Restored)

A Poem by Amanda Crandall
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The man of a thousand voices
Each sings a different tune
Each note precious and unique
No word casually strewn

You have given life to shadows
And in all of us, so much more
Cowboys, Knights, Angels, and Goddesses
Despite the tainted self reflections
we seem to adore

You have shown us your tribulations
With such beautiful, modest grace
Each visit to your realm teaches us more
That there are places in the stars
where we can take our place

You have never breached your character
Or stabbed the cat to save the dove
You taught me to trust the flow of my pen
And what God meant when he said
to your neighbor give your love

You have given me the courage
To leave the past behind
Robert, your words are the salve
To ease my troubled mind

© 2008 Amanda Crandall


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Wow MMM. I am at a lost for words and you know that never happens. LOL First of all THANK YOU. I am completely flattered by this, this beautiful piece of art. You are such an amazing writer and inspiration to me continuously. I have never had anyone ever write anything about me. I am truly humbled by the words you say about me. To know I made an effect on someone is the greatest gift that I could ever receive. Thank you for your friendship and wonderful words of praise.

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.




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Oh, this is wonderful. 25 stars! lol Robert deserves this. He is a wonderful human being and a dear friend and I thank you for writing this!!!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


12 of 15 people found this review constructive.

A wonderfully written tribute. "never ... stabbed the cat to save the dove." Very clever.

Posted 17 Years Ago


13 of 15 people found this review constructive.


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Amanda Crandall
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Hello my name is Amanda and I am an english/creative writing major at ASU. I do not think good writing is a pure organic ejaculation of spirit; nor do I think it is an exacting formula that can be.. more..

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