Well, we must better articulate in eloquence and listen in sincerity eh? I just got a summons for jury duty next month so I may be doing a trial of hearing before long. I'm in my sixties and never served on jury duty before. It may be interesting if I'm chosen. We'll see.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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1 Year Ago
I went, I saw, I went home and they paid me. (laughing) I didn't really want to do that anyway.
I feel this is about knowing the true power of your own voice. The person speaks but may not be understood but they still use their voice. I could be wrong. I like the shortness of this poem how it conveys alot in so few words!
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2 Years Ago
thank you Aura, breve only shows weep, when in quarrel; it hurts me so much, that I say none, :D
There you go..very direct and you can hear the walls falling all around you. Only one commitment and once you free your ego, will, and release all but that silence that lets whatever write have its say and this is when you hear the poetry come a-knocking. Well presented and like the machinegun Staccato as if making some wall understand your currency of point, It is very much a significant part of this entirety. Well done and thank you for the sharing~
I liked the short statements. Each worthwhile and powerful. You give enough to tempt the reader and make them want to know more. When we feel apart from someone, something. We feel empty. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
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2 Years Ago
thank you Cayote, It's hard to tell someone something when I'm angry or upset. I hit every object a.. read morethank you Cayote, It's hard to tell someone something when I'm angry or upset. I hit every object all the time, because I can't express myself. I wan't to say, but I just cry inwardly and stare. I find it hard to tell my feelings. I write, but I hardly speak, :D thanks for reading, hon
2 Years Ago
You are welcome, dear poet. Most of us, rarely show emotions.
Body language in your words. I could feel the distance between who you are communicating with and you. Then maybe try singing your thought as notes on a fret of emotion. Strings that carry no sound into a body with no hollow. But we are listening...
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2 Years Ago
Yes, William, I stand pissed. I break, hit everything in sight when it happens LOL. :D
Before you speak, think about what you are going to say; those words mean nothing to me….emptiness endures….I shall do the same” in emptiness I speak….though I fret as well. Time will tell.
Best
B.
sometimes one shouldn't speak, yet, we can't help ourselves, think first, not something we do well. silence, never overrated in my book. I like this :)
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2 Years Ago
glad you did, :D thing is, I wan't to say something but cannot. It's really me who wants to reclaim.. read moreglad you did, :D thing is, I wan't to say something but cannot. It's really me who wants to reclaim, but i don't say a word to him, :) thank you for reading and reviewing, :D
2 Years Ago
Follow your instincts, timing will present itself. And you are welcome. ;)
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