Big Ego

Doesn't carrying that ego
ever get old, sometimes I
just want to put you in
a choke hold

You smile that smile
that says your so
much better, but
I laugh at your act
and pull the lose string
on your expensive new
sweater

You won't be laughing for
long, when I rip your ego
inch by inch and there is
nothing left of you, your
on the the verge of the losing
brink

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

Oh stop being so hard on yourself. i love this poem. since living in nY theres lots of egotist around. One guy i know is a friend of a friend. hes a huge jerk, hes only kind to women but very condescending to men. he also inpsired my 'shady photographer' piece. anyways, yeah its best to not let the big egotist under our skin. let them suffer in their own hell. i really doubt they are happy with themselves

[K-mo]

I don't think this one is very good, I just wrote as I went and well I just know it's not one of my best poems