For You

I've gotten to the point where there is not much left to give

you took a huge part of me when you said those things to me

I walk along as if I see nothing and I have no words to speak

but you push me to the edge and I say too much, I have come 

to hate you so 

I have gotten used to knowing when to hold my breathe and 

bite back what I will undoubtfully regret, I do my best for your 

own best interest

Words unspoken swirl angrily inside my skull, I put them at a lull 

just for you my dear, I do it all for you so you may not up and disappear

I walk along as if I see nothing and I have no words to speak

but you push me to the edge and I say too much, I have come 

to hate you so

For you I would walk through broken glass, because my heart is yours

even though it is not what it once was, it is built to last through all the 

cracks

Reviews

[just Penny]

When I first read this, I immediately thought they were lyrics and think they would make for a great song ! But I like the message contained in this write, how we put up with so much pain and hurt "because we love" and take seriously our vows and obligations. I think sometimes the easy road is to call it quits and walk away. Takes courage to work it through. I like the line "walk through broken glass" - ouch ! Not sure about "put them at a lull" though and think this could be improved, although I'm still thinking on what with. Penny :)

[K-mo]

I would like your honest opinion, terrible or not so terrible?