Stronger than ever Before

I shouldn't have to try so hard to prove that I changed

the more you pry the harder it is to break the chains that

are holding me down

You dig so deep inside of me, I've lost all sight of what

is keeping me whole, my soul sunk down into the ground

bleeding with gaping holes

Why all this pain for what may I ask but to prove that

I got everything to lose, my life means nothing in your

eyes and all I see is hatred and you spitfire of all your

little lies

I have wasted away enough inside to know there is more

in store for me than what you can't provide, so let me take

back what's rightfully mine with all its flaws and all, cause I

can mend it and make it beat stronger than ever before

as it had before the day you entered my door

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

A mature expression of raw thoughts and the true opinions of a relationship that's long worn itself thin, causing you to withdraw from it, thoroughly irritated, and demand everything you've given back because the other person hasn't succeeded in making you happy (it sounds like a rather greedy way to view relationships, but it must be viewed greedily at times when the relationship seems to prove more frustrating than beneficial for a prolonged period of time). Well done and you portray the frustration of an exasperated, possibly heartbroken speaker already in the beginning throes of the path to recovery. Keep it up, K-Mo!

[K-mo]

wrote this in the spur of my emotions, so it is raw anger and helplessness here. I'm sure you all can see my vulnerability in this piece but that just goes to show who I truly am