When One door Slams

I stumbled across a hall with many kinds of doors

Ones were tall and some were short, some even round

or square and swirled around

But what door would be the one I shall enter because

journey must not end here, I want to know where it will

take me from here

My mind is whirling with all the different opportunities

the mystery makes my heart pound so loudly, as I stand here

in this hall; feeling quite small but oddly tall

When one door slams, another door is ready to be open

and here to hoping it is the one that makes my journey

whatever it was supposed to be, and hope that I don't lose

my way

I stumbled across a door that stood out from all the rest

it wasn't anything special, in fact it was quite plain but yet

it held my gaze, and the more I stood there wondering

I felt my feet wandering ever closer

I hesitate opening up the door and ponder some more

what is it about this particular door that makes my heart

sore?!

I close my eyes and soon feel my fingers latch tightly around the cold

door handle and without a word I open the door and enter, and from what

I see is nothing but light, so bright I fear I might lose sight

I close my eyes for just one moment and then open my eyes and then it is dark,

what happened to that light that once made my eyes sore.. I mustn't have opened

the right door

Reviews

[Atreus]

An amazing metaphor. There are so many choices. But which way will you choose to go and what will be waiting for you on the other side of each door you choose.

[MBUYISA]

thank you for sharing

keep good poems coming

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. It was blank. A splendid poem. Bravo................

[Shaquana Adams]

I mustn't have opened
the right door

Brilliant write! I enjoyed :)

[K-mo]

Thank you Shaquana! I really felt this one, the words kind of just wrote themselves:) Glad you enjoyed it

[A. Amos]

This one is classic and simply epic, very beautiful concept and you portray very well.

[K-mo]

Thank you for taking the time to read, and I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed it(:

[A. Amos]

I truly enjoy your poetry and will be back for more, you're most welcome my dear

[Sami Khalil]

Then total silence. Bravo....................

[K-mo]

technical difficulties lol I now have a real poem in here for you to enjoy(: