Stay Afloat

I float weightlessly on the surface no effort to stay afloat
It is what I must do on a daily, but I have much to ponder lately
Where will this tide take me, is this who I am supposed to be?

I float weightlessly past all that passes me by and
all I can do is just wait until the winds begin to subside
Where will this tide take me, is this where I am supposed to be?

I come across a shift in the wind, and my path then begins to change
I am now in the shallows and it makes me feel a bit strange, now is the
time to take a stand and plant my feet on solid ground

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Sometimes it's tough for us to find solid ground when we feel so lost at sea. Just float and don't question the tide, just see where it takes you and where you end up. It'll be an interesting journey. Never question your journey, just close your eyes and drift. Life is a journey and we never know where we are going to end up, but that's sometimes the thrill of it. Questioning things will always keep us in the dark, let your heart free and be free with it. Take a step out of your comfort zone and see where you end up.

[K-mo]

Your words are very true! We never know where we are to end up until we just stop trying to find the way and take a chance and go with it! Thanks again for the read:)

[Tai Ryens]

The realization that you can't just simply ~be anymore, and that you have to take a stand for yourself from now on. I've felt this way when I came to the belief that nothing happens for a reason, and that nothing at all is predestined to happen; I have to make it happen. Nothing good comes to those who wait, but only to those that take action.

[zainul]

I feel very happy to see that you have an opportunity to take a stand and plant your feet on solid ground.
Wonderful piece.It gives strength to renew efforts to live again.

[K-mo]

I want to go far with my dreams, now is the time I actually do something about it and that is what this piece it trying to say. I need to change my path in order to get somewhere new

[zainul]

hanks for cherishing dreams to get better place to live.
Enjoy your determination.
I adore your courage.

[K-mo]

I want to be a published writer by the time I leave this earth so I got to start somewhere!

[zainul]

I hope that your aspiration will be fulfilled.

[K-mo]

Me too, and I wish you well with your writing as well my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

Stay afloat on water and when you come to shore stand firm on high ground...Bravo.................:)

[K-mo]

does it feel a bit undone to you?

[Sami Khalil]

Not. Good as is...:)..........

[K-mo]

okay, because I felt the ending was kind of unfinished but I am glad you like it:)

[Sami Khalil]

:).............

[K-mo]

I get to critical of my work it always seems unfinished

[Sami Khalil]

:).........................