Fade Away

My love for you is slowly fading away and all that's left is memories of you

I hate the constant reminders of what we once had, it hurts me and makes

me real sad, I know what we had was real but you chose to let it go and for

what I will never truly know

 

I sometimes think I see your face, far off in a crowded room, I hear

a song that you used to play and hear phrases and things you would

always say but I got to do what I can to let these memories fade away

 

You moved on and so should I, I had enough tears to cry and now it's my

time to say good bye to what is now holding me back and that is thoughts

of you and I getting back together, I know in the end it is for the better

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ees]

Not exactly what I was expecting to find here. That isn't a bad or good thing, it just is. The phrasing and the language is simple and to the point. That works for this piece. The last line isn't my favorite and the middle stanza is my favorite, it sounded the best in there.
Nice work.
(now you have my thoughts while reading this... haha)

[K-mo]

I need to work on my wording in my works, thank you for your honesty on it!

[Ees]

No problem!

[Tai Ryens]

You've expressed the loneliness of longing for someone no longer yours very well. Well done.

[K-mo]

Thanks Tai!

[Alex Vidmar]

Awww, so sad... We definitely all know this feeling, Kim. You've captured it well.

[K-mo]

Thanks! I know in time I will find what is best for me and this poem will just be a reminder of what I once had

[Alex Vidmar]

In time, we all do. Hey, I have a new story up that I'm going to put into a contest, but I need more feedback on it, would you mind reviewing it for me? It's called Snow Angels

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

This is why I always carry an eraser with me when I meet new people. If it doesn't work out between us then I write it in a journal and then erase it. My mind.. the journal.. tomorrow is a new day. Thanks for reminding me, K-mo.

[K-mo]

Always here to help! Thanks for reading my friend!

[Lydia Shutter]

Bittersweet longing for what once was. Very emotive. Well written. lydi**

[K-mo]

Thank you Lydia

[Sami Khalil]

"My love for you is slowly fading away and all that's left is memories of you

I hate the constant reminders of what we once had, it hurts me"

I can feel the palpable pain and hurt in this sad poem...:)

[K-mo]

Thanks Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........

[K-mo]

This is kind of what I have been feeling lately. Please feel free to tell me your honest opinion on it!