Wanna be Heard

Wanna be heard
fly higher than any bird
wanna be heard
Just listen to the words

Wanna fly high
higher than anyone has ever tried
wanna fly high
don't let the world pass on by

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Short and sweet

[Jordan's Back]

Damn Straight, Excellent and to the point.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the lines:
fly higher than a bird.
listen to the words.
Nice write.

[K-mo]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[K-mo]

I think it might be too short but I am glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

I have short poems too. Nothing wrong with that. Keep a variety.

[K-mo]

thanks for the advice:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[R.O.M.E.T.S.I.]

Short, sweet, to the point. Describes how we all feel. Nice.

[K-mo]

Thank you, I am glad you liked it!

[luna11]

It's good! Might want to add some punctuation though. I like how it's so short and to the point but it says so much. :)
x

[K-mo]

Thank you!

[K-mo]

what do you think?!