My Time is Running Out

Wishing for something to become

of this I'm tired of wondering if

I should be done with it

 

Feels like I'm wasting my time

wondering all the time this isn't

right I want some more insight

 

Where do I turn for some answers

because I feel my prayers have

been tampered with so sick of this

 

Wondering this

pondering it

Just so sick of it

 

Help me out I know you

hear me I'm getting weary

 

My story is running thin

I am surfing in my pool

of sin slowly sinking, sinking

in

 

Hurry my time is running out

why am I lost in all this doubt

can you lead me, lead me out?

 

Reviews

[Ella]

I don't know if I like this poem to be honest. It might just be my tired mind, but this doesn't make sense to me. It seems to have a good flow and stuff, but to me it doesn't make sense.

[XxKooperxX]

sweet poem :) i love this one

[Steven Cash]

reminds me of Rescue Me by Keri Roberts

Bravo, Kim, great job!

[K-mo]

Thanks Steven!

[Steven Cash]

no prob at all

[That_Girl]

"My story is running thin

I am surfing in my pool

of sin slowly sinking, sinking

in" - I love that stanza! That's impeccable!

[K-mo]

Thanks xXEmoEeyoreXx glad you liked it!

[That_Girl]

Anytime darling!

[K-mo]

is it just me or the more I read it, it sounds sort of like a rap?! At least it does to me lol

[That_Girl]

Hmmm it could be! I didn't think of that when I read it but I can sorta see it now! :)

[K-mo]

haha awesome! Well don't ask me to sing it, I would make a bad rapper lol

[That_Girl]

lol same here... I'd laugh the whole way through. lol

[K-mo]

me too and when I start laughing no telling if I can stop or not ^_^!

[That_Girl]

lol I know! Hahaha I feel ya!