Tick Tock

tick tock

got brain block

tick tock

goes the clock

tick tock

another thought

tick tock

there it's lost

tick tock

its coming back

tick tock

when will it stop

tick tock

tick tock

tick tock

that's all I hear

is tick tock

Reviews

[Cynthia Man]

I really like it! I love the structure of the poem, and the repetition of " tick tock" it gives me a very strong feeling! To me, it is like pressure of which I experience, I don't know is the same with you, but thats what I get from reading it, hahaxd
A Great write!~

[K-mo]

that's so what I feel too! Glad you like it

[Cynthia Man]

Ur welcome :) Its a great pleasure reading your writing!

[K-mo]

I'm happy to hear you like my work

[Summer'sBreeze]

A poem well done.

[K-mo]

Thank you!!

[Tai Ryens]

In all honesty, repetition often ruins a concept lest it is done correctly. In this said poem: I feel you've repeated 'tick tock' far too much. I comprehend your concept, how pressure can get to somebody as quickly as it does slowly to another; cursed hands that go in circles and retrace the exact same path over and over again. My apologies for rambling.

[XxKooperxX]

*two thumbs way up* :)

[K-mo]

Thanks XxKooperxX for the lovely review!

[XxKooperxX]

you're welcome :)

[K-mo]

yeah I know maybe not my best work but it's what came to mind!