Remember Me

We all have our own demons, skeletons in our closets...our own battles of good vs evil.

With every step I make, next after the last

I know the twisted path I take will soon become my past.

There is no way to turn back and change what has been done

as the reflection in the mirror reminds me of what's become.

 

Some say I am a villian, some say I am a saint, some say I am

only human and mistakes no doubt I'll make.

I know I have to find myself looking deep at what's within;

What do you see when you look at me? Look at me again.

 

The image that's upon your eyes that can only see so deep;

like pieces of a puzzle falling and tumbling to your feet.

Be careful now on how you move, tread lightly when you go;

remember me when all souls sing the songs of a tomorrow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[maxwell]

Sometimes there is conflict and confusion in our journey through life. This write conveys this well.
We all have been judged...made mistakes. We learn from them..follow our hearts and do the best
We can. This write is so easy to relate to in our own lives. Thank You for sharing once again

[An owl on the moon]

Your music rises, dancing us all in your life... what has been... your image now that glimmers... and what is to become of you tomorrow... And how each fragment, each memory, holds each breath you've taken, completing the wholeness of your wonder. So powerful.

[E.H. Monroe]

It's not the battles that got me, although the series of em is powerful. It's the questions. The idea of self and seeing self on the surface. Almost like you entice people to look deeper just to find the demons. Instead of like "look who I am" its like "Look what horrors lie within" almost like the inner you is a trap.
I started with the right poem this morning...
nicely done

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a very good poem.Love the line What.....Look at me again..which says a lot about our inability to simply look at each other.Well done.

[Tate Morgan]

Self revelation.I do this as well and try to be a better soul .Its good it is a conscience

[V. K. Harris]

I love this write, it flows so very well, it reads like a lifetime. Excellent!

[The Analog Kid]

This flowed real nice. I was just thinking about the phrase "only human" yesterday myself.

[Dream Weaver]

Written very well, and I agree we all have some sort of ghosts in our past.
I enjoyed the insight as well as the rhyming...nicely done...