Anytime

A little ditty about the s**t in me. ;-)

Looking as if she had no other place to go

She smiled at him like he was her whole everything

knowing that he wanted to touch her there in

the place that he had once been and wanted to be.

 

Pursing her lips she glides close to his ear and

whispers ever so sweetly, "je t'aime mon ami."

The words are still biting his ear as she moves

away from his neck, leaving the pain of the sting.

 

Admiring her beauty and sharing in her delight he

wants to know from her, "Will you wait for me or

will I have to be like all others and stand in line?"

With a deep laugh she answered, "For you, anytime."

Reviews

[Revery]

:) ...................................................

[An Ordinary Woman]

Girl, if you have this stuff popping in your head, you really have it going on....
Brilliant, sexy, sensual. :)

[The Analog Kid]

This is a snapshot of a passing moment. The passion is intense. I like how you used third person; it gives it a universal appeal. A little French never hurt either.

[Dream Weaver]

Qu'il est doux, you dream in french.
A lovely piece for sure...

[An owl on the moon]

You set such a scene.. it just draws one into the sensuality and tension of the wanting... Glad you were able to jot this down!

[Klyn]

I went to bed last night after working 16 hours and layed there wide awake....even after ambien and these are the words that came into my head. :)