Vaporous

I have undergone ecstasy and emotion simultaneously.
Their doppelgangers
, have being stitched in white slits and wet heat.
Quite vaporous,
am I quite the writer anymore?
My twin,
my muse,
has deaden the streets- words trapped in anterior motion.
I guess creativity has been unfaithful.
She's either more than vaporous candy....or I'm just a hormonal cusp.

Author's Note

All of my poetry is original and copyrighted.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I guess creativity has been unfaithful.
She's either more than vaporous candy....or I'm just a hormonal cusp.

Splendid wording, kleio.

[Kleio13]

Thank you Pryde!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

That there is an implicit difference betweeen "ecstasy" and "emotion" is rather unnerving as is your patent inuendo. Oh yes, anymore-writer of vaporous twinning muse. That hormonal candy, perhaps unfaithful but certainly not uncreative.

100 doppelganger cusps

[Kleio13]

100 doppelganger cusps.....haha hahaha. I enjoy reading this review over and over again. Thank you very much

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

The enjoyment of reading can be infectious. WPO (World Poetry Organization) :)

[Frieda P]

Doesn't read that way to me, you're in denial big time woman! If this is your muse's betrayal, you best be sending her flowers, cuz she done you good. I'm opting for your second guess ;)

[Kleio13]

Hahaha thank you Frieda!!!!!!!!!!!! And maybe I should send her some flowers.

[Frieda P]

You're too silly, better make it two dozen!! Was my pleasure, I love your quirky mind.

[Einstein Noodle]

my curious thought sprung up in the first line ... ecstasy and emotion ... they are so very intertwined .. so ecstasy to another level ...

"their dopplgangers" confuses me .. do you mean they are (ecstasy and emotion) dopplegangers? or in a possessive sense ..ecstasy and emotion possess these harbingers as a whip .. :)) ok ..

you are quite the writer .. says i .. your sharp knife cuts in all the right places .. on the dark side of the street ..
do you mean deadened instead of deaden?? ..that line is so good for me ;)
and i am spent on the last two lines ...

i think its the muse who wanes and waxes in a hormonal soup ..

you know i love you Kleio13 .. so glad you have shared this ..who that tries can not relate?!
E.

[Kleio13]

I meant it in a possessive sense and I am glad that you enjoy my work.

[Einstein Noodle]

should have known Mistress :))) .. i truly do enjoy your work ... your voice is so powerful .. savvy ..sexy .. street wise beyond your years .. and i enjoy; and am challenged by your poetry ... so for me, i say, keep writing, keep posting and dont leave us nor wait for the muse girl ;)
E.

[kublakhan27]

You are definitely speaking my language here...the ecstasy of creativity dwarfed by the emotion of self-doubt and abandoning muses...you have no idea how often I ask myself that question, probably on a daily basis...the muse is a twin but we probably argue with our relatives more than anyone else...I hate it when creativity is unfaithful...and yet when it comes knocking like a prodigal son, sure enough I let it in every time...great piece K.

[Kleio13]

It`s awesome that you can relate. I thought at first that what I had written was mediocre. My muse has been quite treacherous