Raining Eyes

The forecast.

Raining Eyes for the rest of my life.

The eyes of mine were transforming to a well,

toss a quarter at me, make a wish.

See? Look what you've done to me.

My cheeks are stained and red.

I feel drowsy, and cold-hearted.

You've turned me to ice.

When will the storm end?

Will the sun come out tomorrow?

Will the calm wind dry the raindrops from my face?

There has to be a crack within these clouds.

My eyes are blurry from the never-ending rainy days.

It's your fault.

You've turned me into a dark, gray cloud.

You and me. We were the sunshine on a cloudy day.

That's been ruined.

I'm the raindrops greeting the sidewalk,

broken-hearted.

And where are you?

No one knows.

You've left me alone, in the darkness.

Alone with my Raining Eyes.

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Author's Note

Straight from the heart. So, hopefully, the emotion comes through well enough.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent imagery, the title is brillant! I love this one!

[Geralyn Miller]

Nice imagery, sad story; fortunately, every storm will pass and the sun will shine anew.

[Moonflower]

Very well done, my dear.

[cfix]

I really liked this piece alot. The feelings are expressed so well.
Saad really! Well written.

[PaperHearts]

Very nice write! The emotions were so raw and so real in this piece, and I could really relate to the heartache that you expressed. I liked all of the references to nature and the weather, and thought that it was a really effective way of capturing the mood and tone of the poem. The phrase 'Raining Eyes' was something that I liked, particularly because of the fact that it was a new, intriguing, and creative idea. :) Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[jazmin]

ouch, I felt what you were feeling while writing this. i loved it:)