I loved you

I loved you,

I loved the old you,

the one that kissed me softly,

the one that told me everything would be okay,

the one that held me tight,

the one that talked in a light voice.

 

I loved you,

I loved the old you,

the one that looked at me so sweetly,

the one that thought of me night and day,

the one that missed me constantly,

the one that told me that you love me.

Reviews

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Wow. You just took my feelings and wrote them down perfectly. You are an incredible writer. Keep it up!

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[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good write. kat24

[McGee]

very beautiful