Goodbye *poof*

Goodbye *poof*

A Poem by ~Death Is The Key~

I use to look at you and see a friend,

a buddy,

a pal,

but now,

all I see is an enemy,

you left,

and I never followed,

you could say that it's my fault,

or you could say it's just faith,

faith,

some how I don't believe,

that it could be,

just faith,

or destiny,

I think you got sick of me,

trying so hard to be your friend,

and that you left,

no warning,

no good bye,

just got up and left,

like everyone else,

you coward away,

into a mob of popularity,

how could you,

my best friend,

gone forever,

just like that,

*poof*

© 2010 ~Death Is The Key~


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~Death Is The Key~
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Hi,
After the no goodbye part, did you mean just got right? So you might want to check that. But other than that it is really good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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