Away

When you're feeling sad and alone, just sing this simple little tune and your worries with be lifted right off your chest ^_^

"I am counting the days
Till I find my way
Through these troubles and trials," I say.

And this life of mine
Is going through a time
Where it feels like the world's not so kind

When they're gone
I feel alone
I'm dying under my skin
Greif may hurt
And love won't work
So please take me away

As time passes by
I will wonder why
I feel sadness, lonesome and strife

What I can't understand
Is why I must stand
On my own without a hand

When they're gone
I feel alone
I'm dying under my skin
Greif may hurt
And love won't work
So please take me away [x2]

In the end
I'll make amends
I'll find my way somehow
Life is tough
It's hard enough
But, no, I will not cry.

Life is tough...
It's hard enough...
But, no... I will not cry.

Author's Note

"So please take me away" can have more than one meaning, I think. For me, it's supposed to mean, "Relieve me of my stress." The song pretty much helps me do so... even though both times I've actually sang this in public were when my throat was partially choking up.
but no... I did not cry.

Reviews

[WordMaster]

I enjoyed this read

Easy to follow and the image you created is wonderful

Take me away from all the stress of the day �

That's what this poem did for me � Thanks