Music, Music

A poem I made when I was depressed in PE. I was secretivly listening to my MP3 player and then this idea came to me.

Music, music, take me away
My thoughts are not allowed to stay
I'll listen to everything you say
As long as I am happy that way

Song and sound, help me through
The troubles, they're harsh and terrible too
Make them stop, I hope they end soon
So I won't rely so much on you

Powerful beat, you are so engaging
I love to hear the voices sing
Other things are not as interesting
So play your tune, make my ears ring

Reviews

[Pakino]

Very simple poem conveying the message of being taken away in the music. Not bad. Has a nice rhythm to it.