But Then... We Escape

But Then... We Escape

A Poem by KittyStarr1101
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We watch.
We fail.
We try,
But then we prevail.

We have won,
We get the game.
No more sacrifices,
Or becoming a fame.

We hide from them,
They cheated our great make.
But then,
We escape.

© 2012 KittyStarr1101


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KittyStarr1101
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Very cool. Certainly makes one think, which is always good! Great job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting write. I liked it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hey, this was really good! It could mean so many different things, and the rhyming was pretty good . . . not forced at all.
You are very talented! Don't ever let people tell you otherwise. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short, simple and to the point, well odne.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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KittyStarr1101

Bikini Bottom, IL



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I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..

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