Finding Me

So tired..

I am lost.

No one can hear my cries,

Or do they?

They know I'm here,

But yet no hello.

What your wondering is;

Where is she?

Am i flying with demons?

Or dancing in a church.

I could be dying,

Blood pouring out of my head,

Flowing unending. 

Do you want to know where I am?

Where you can find me?

I will tell you..

Once you tell me.

Where are you?

Author's Note

Hi, I is Kitty.

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Very interesting and cleverly worded write. It makes the reader think. Well done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice wording
:)

[paparapapa]

This one makes me think. Great write. ;)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

"I will tell you..
Once you tell me.
Where are you?"

Amazing poem and thinking once again :)

[TheKaylaPup]

Well, I'm sitting in class. (We are all working on the computers.) Now, I would care to know where you are kitty, you really ought not to be trapped in potentially deathly situations.

But seriously, good poem. It's different, but that's what makes it good. In line 4, do they know where you are, or are you just wondering if they might? If you were just thinking they might, I would ask
"Do they know I'm here,
But yet no hello?"
=)

[SwagMaster]

Awesome poem, great read