Why??

Why??

A Poem by KittyStarr1101
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Just something...

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Why is it when your friends ask you to stop,
You don't?
But when he ask's you,
You stop automatically.
How can he have that much control over you,
Then just forget you like that?
Why are we so gullible?
Why don't we just treat him like one of our ordinary friends?
Probably because,
We hope he will be with us forever.
Why do we think this?
Cause most of the time,
It won't work out.
Why?
Why can't he love me?

© 2011 KittyStarr1101


Author's Note

KittyStarr1101
Just a reminder, I am always tired when I write so I barely remember anything I write soo.... sorry.

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Gloomy, and wonderful. Just the way I like it. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


you have a very insightful mind, especially for someone so young (are you still 12 like your profile says?)

Posted 13 Years Ago


can totally relate! awesome work:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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So true. Very good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes your bf/gf can have a controllong effect...can become obsessive which is then bad...love your poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sure cassidy..... and i really liked it keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


Guys can have a big control over girls sometimes.. and it shouldnt be so. we are our own women... Beautiful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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KittyStarr1101
KittyStarr1101

Bikini Bottom, IL



About
I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..

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