The title is definitely an eye-catcher and I think the subject of this poem is interesting. This leaves me thinking which is the best poem or is there really one? haha. i don't know. Anyway, in my opinion, this needs some editing, like 'poemist' to 'poet.' However, I'm only an amateur when it comes to poetry so I don't really know the technicalities - if this is allowed or not. But if it is allowed, then don't mind me. haha. But, still, great write. And keep on writing. :)
Certainly caught my attention with the title, but I didn't lose interest. The poem got me thinking. Too bad I don't think there is one best poem. Too many great ones already and new coming along!
I really like how this starts, in fact I like it all the way through and then it seems like you wanted it to end, so it did. And It is clear that you ended it, but, i think it could have a stronger ending. Awesome idea too. Keep writing Kitty-Starr even if you're tired. =)
The title is definitely an eye-catcher and I think the subject of this poem is interesting. This leaves me thinking which is the best poem or is there really one? haha. i don't know. Anyway, in my opinion, this needs some editing, like 'poemist' to 'poet.' However, I'm only an amateur when it comes to poetry so I don't really know the technicalities - if this is allowed or not. But if it is allowed, then don't mind me. haha. But, still, great write. And keep on writing. :)
I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..