Love

A Poem by KittyStarr1101

Love is like the wings of a butterfly.

Fragile but beautiful.

But then love turns into the wings of a moth.

Still fragile but plain.

Soon the moth falls to the ground.

The devil and his minions apear,

They dance upon the moth until it is broken and dead.

Just like love.

© 2011 KittyStarr1101

Author's Note

Sorry if it seem's kinda sucky. Just woke up though.

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SilentDreamer

I liked the analogy until the devil part. I don't know why. Still there is always improvement in every work that could be done. Especially in mine. But for being twelve this is great!! Mature analogy for a young age. It's sweet. I love the last line. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..

i like the metaphors here

Posted 13 Years Ago

13ReasonsWhy

absolutely beautiful....

Posted 13 Years Ago

paparapapa

Interesting analogy. Good job. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago

TheKaylaPup

I really like the butterfly analogy, it sets it apart from other heartbreak poems, still sad though.

Posted 13 Years Ago

SoulCrusader (Yas)

Such a captivating and mature insightful write...another stunner!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

SwagMaster

I loved it, was a great read

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on November 6, 2011
Last Updated on November 7, 2011
Tags: love, heart, peace, emo, goth, troubled, dream, clouds

Author

KittyStarr1101

Bikini Bottom, IL

About

I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..