Such A Long Time Ago

We sat here,

Once.

We sang songs,

Greeted joy with open arms. 

Now,

You've left. 

You're still there of course. 

You'll always be there.

But you're mind is gone. 

The broken memories cast this hall with it's light,

Filling it with laughter and happiness. 

I'll drag this knife,

Over,

And over.

I'll kill them,

Just like you've killed me.

Reviews

[The Scholar]

Very emotional write. The repetition used adds immensely to the effect. This was a heavy piece, good work my friend

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Emotive write, well done :)