Shattered

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Shattered

 

The walls are shattering around me

 

The dusts of my pasts caught in my throat

 

I can see what had been, break into pieces

 

Shattering my every hope

Can you really hear my empty heart shatter?

Author's Note

Ignore grammar.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is well written. I could feel the sense of losing control and the heart being broken in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[just is]

So silent you can hear a pin fall! this is wonderful, i can feel the hurt and break.