Scream

Scream

 

 

 

I need an escape from this dark empty place

 

My mind can wander freely

 

But my heart won't let me out

 

What has become of what I knew?

 

 

You've forgotten me

 

Thrown me away for something better

 

I'll scream even though it's useless

 

And I'll cry even though it's pointless

 

 

Someone give me a sighn

 

Tell me how to set myself free

 

Let me break away from what's holding me back

 

Just give me a sighn

 

 

I'll burn all your pictures

 

And stop looking at your calls

 

I'll play along like I never knew you

 

And I'll give my love to someone else

 

 

I am a hostage

 

Left in a dark room screaming and pleading

 

But not for very long

 

Someday I'll find an escape

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar

Reviews

[Steven]

wow kitti o_o. i knew u could write but i wasn't expecting that. it was amazing.

[Weaza]

I really like, how descriptive it is and how you show so much emotion in it ^^ good job

[Enigma]

Wow!! So raw an intense, yet so familiar to me. After all, I write such poems too...
I loved the flow and the way you've expressed yourself. Truly great!! You've potrayed all the feelings in a very realistic way...
In short, I enjoyed it...
Don't you worry in the least. Everything will turn out to be fine...maybe even better...
Well Done!!