In My Own Little World..

In my own little world

There is no sunshine

Only the darkest depths of winter.

 

In my own little world

There are no laughter

Only the throbbing sounds of pain.

 

In my own little world

There is no happiness

Only the reminders of despair.

 

In my own little world

There is blood

Matching well with the darkness in the air.

 

In my own little world

There are cries

Ringing out in the hollows of the heart.

 

In my own little world

There are tears

Flowing past the cracks of life.

 

In my own little world

I remain forgotten

Wrapped up in the darkness that claims.

 

In my own little world

I have no happiness

Because I've lost the meaning of it. 

 

In my own little world

I am forsaken.

Gone from even this world of mine..

Reviews

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This was eerily perfect! Those of us with creative minds explore depths which regular minds cannot, yet, for our creations, our expressions of self, we get criticized. I'm beginning to think that it is THEIR world which is dark. I loved this...it was raw and straightforward. Your pain can be felt greatly here, but just remember...you're here for a reason = ]

[The Great Nothing]

In the fifth line I would change are to is, but other than that bravo. :D I like the piece, and I'll be looking more into your work on DA. Keep an eye out for ChosenDefect.