If You...

If you hear my heartbeat from a thousand miles away,

Would you cran your ears and listen harder?

If you hear my heartbeat fade from a thousand miles away,

Would you come for me and bid a final goodbye?

If you hear my heart beat from a thousand miles away,

Would you cry for me and watch me burn?

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Tactically inherent, it makes the read question their own goodbyes of times past, flows perfectly, well done.