With You

Deep inside my bed

I wish I was holding you instead

Even though I try so hard

I reach out for nothing..reach out for nothing

The bad times that we had

The fights that we've been through

Can we put it all to rest?

And that stupid distance too?

I'm so lonely without you..

Where are you now? 

Are you sleeping well?

Oh can you tell?

I'm just lying here just crying

Wishing you were here with me

Deep inside my head

I dream about you everyday

Even though I held you tight

I woke up all alone..woke up all alone

The good times that we had

The smiles that we've shared

Can we bring it all back?

And those fun chats we had?

I'm so lonely without you..

So where are you now? 

Are you sleeping well?

Oh can you tell?

I'm just lying here just crying

Wishing you were here with me

It never seemed so bad

To be all alone here

Until I looked to my heart

And wondered why

And wondered why

Why it left me for you

I'm so lonely without you..

So where are you now? 

Are you sleeping well?

Oh can you tell?

I'm just lying here just crying

Wishing I was there with you

I miss you, my love..

Reviews

[BrokenAngelicHeart]

^///^ I see what you mean... I don't supposed revealing that it's actually a song written and recorded by me would redeem me..? ^//^"

It's different tempo and beat to different stanza, which COULD explain why the stanzas have different sort of patterns...

But I'm not making any excuses XD It is true that the pattern changes in different stanzas..

[BrokenAngelicHeart]

XD Well I guess I'm different a little... Cause it was written with mixed emotions...and apparently it showed.. >_>

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Although I get that this is a letter almost to a loved one, once there, I feel it lacks sexual debt, a mirrored reflection of vulgarity or even a simple graphic image would make the reader beg for more, well written.