With You

With You

A Poem by BrokenAngelicHeart

Deep inside my bed
I wish I was holding you instead
Even though I try so hard
I reach out for nothing..reach out for nothing

The bad times that we had
The fights that we've been through
Can we put it all to rest?
And that stupid distance too?

I'm so lonely without you..

Where are you now? 
Are you sleeping well?
Oh can you tell?
I'm just lying here just crying
Wishing you were here with me

Deep inside my head
I dream about you everyday
Even though I held you tight
I woke up all alone..woke up all alone

The good times that we had
The smiles that we've shared
Can we bring it all back?
And those fun chats we had?

I'm so lonely without you..

So where are you now? 
Are you sleeping well?
Oh can you tell?
I'm just lying here just crying
Wishing you were here with me

It never seemed so bad
To be all alone here
Until I looked to my heart
And wondered why
And wondered why
Why it left me for you

I'm so lonely without you..

So where are you now? 
Are you sleeping well?
Oh can you tell?
I'm just lying here just crying
Wishing I was there with you


I miss you, my love..

© 2011 BrokenAngelicHeart


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^///^ I see what you mean... I don't supposed revealing that it's actually a song written and recorded by me would redeem me..? ^//^"

It's different tempo and beat to different stanza, which COULD explain why the stanzas have different sort of patterns...

But I'm not making any excuses XD It is true that the pattern changes in different stanzas..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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XD Well I guess I'm different a little... Cause it was written with mixed emotions...and apparently it showed.. >_>

Posted 13 Years Ago


^///^ I see what you mean... I don't supposed revealing that it's actually a song written and recorded by me would redeem me..? ^//^"

It's different tempo and beat to different stanza, which COULD explain why the stanzas have different sort of patterns...

But I'm not making any excuses XD It is true that the pattern changes in different stanzas..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Although I get that this is a letter almost to a loved one, once there, I feel it lacks sexual debt, a mirrored reflection of vulgarity or even a simple graphic image would make the reader beg for more, well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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BrokenAngelicHeart
BrokenAngelicHeart

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About me....? Well... I have no idea what to put in here.. I would possibly edit this in the future when I actually know what to put.. Till then... I am a writer, lyricist, singer...photographer, mode.. more..

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