Always Refuse

Just something I came up with late one night and decided to upload.

You say you’re tired of the games

Say it’s me; I’ll take the blame

Under earth, sky, and flame

I chose a fire that won’t be tamed

I choose for things to always change

Yet, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse the chains

You say I’m heartless, cold, and vain

I say I’m nothing but a stain

I will mark the ground with fame

Screaming people will call my name

Maybe in pleasure or in pain

Yet, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse these chains

You say you’re hurt, you say I’m strange

I’m a mask that only feigns

True emotions never came

Forced honest answers down the drain

My heart, my soul you’ll never gain

You’ll try your best and I won’t complain

But, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse those chains.

Reviews

I absolutely love the rhythm of this.

[PadfootBlack]

This could be an AWESOME rap...

[_thesovo]

*dies* This is AMAZINGGGGG!

[PadfootBlack]

So... apparently you've been hiding your talent from me all this time? Damn, kitten. This is intense. *throws it in my favs pile*

[Dream Weaver]

I forgot to mention; Great write Heather...

[Dream Weaver]

Cleverly written your words hit the
mark one after the other. Although
me personally would have broken this
down into stanza some people could
savor each tasty morsel.

[Jennifer Pennington]

Wow, you are an amazing writer from what i can see so far. I love your passion.

[Amaunet]

nicely written. the rhymes don't seem forced, and flow great i particularly like the use of metephor and symbolism you used. all in all a awesome poem