The Encounter

Uhh, i have no idea what i'm gonna be writing about in this chapter. Tell me what you think i should do to make it better and what you think should happen next and what you think of it.

The Silver Moon Key

Chapter 1:

The Encounter

 

I knew that there was fighting going on around me, but the sounds of swords clinging together was dull in my ears and to me it was more like the sound of the wind than the clashing and banging it really was.

I could barely hear it as someone got closer to where i had crumpled up. Regardless of my mind telling me to be quiet I spoke aloud one small, helpless word "Help." I must have realized that i was getting weaker, but i never knew that i was that weak. The person must have heard my whispering voice anyway, because he came to a sudden hault and looked down at me. "Who are you?" he asked me, but when i tried to reply all that came out was a gasping sound. He must have realized that i was unable to talk, so he picked me up. "Don't worry, your safe now."

Then at that moment, everything went black.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think about it and why. Tell me what you think i should do to make it better and what you think should happen next.

Reviews

[Sonya]

Make it an original story. It has lots of potential as a story of your own.

[Kitsune]

I tthink i'll make this a romance, but first i need to know if i should make it bleach or not. Please tell me if you want it to be bleach!!! If you guys don't then i'm gonna make it bleach anyway.