The End of a Rope

The End of a Rope

A Poem by Kissy
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A poem about life's struggle.

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End of a Rope
By Christina Wells

Will I ever be someone that
I am proud to be?
In the future I hope,
but it's so hard to see.

My life is so troubled,
my heart is so weak.
What I need is some will,
but all I've known is defeat.

My mind is telling me how
I feel, but it's so hard
to believe, is this for real?
Can everything possibly
be this bad?
My heart is so tired
of feeling so sad.

Can this all turn around?
Eventually soon I hope.
This world has got me
at the end of its rope.

© 2009 Kissy


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Quite emotional i like it. I however see some breaking up between the lines.
Like my mind tells me how i feel, and some other premature breaking into lines that i see there. They should have been a full line. Good job anyway.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Kissy
Kissy

Pt Pleasant, WV



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I live in Pt Pleasant WV. I attend school at Marshall Community & Technical College. I am currently a Sophomore majoring in Radiology Technology. I love to read, watch movies, listen to music, and of .. more..

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