Plain Jane

Six sentences.

I remember when I was in the eighth grade, I was riding to school with my best friend when her mom had labeled me a "Plain Jane." Added to my already low self-esteem, this title hit me hard, I recall being very introspective; yearning that I could just once be "that girl" that walks into a room, and people begin stumbling over their conversations because they had caught sight of me. Over the years, "Plain Jane" attempted to adapt: lipstick was applied, eye shadow was placed perfectly on my eyelids, and clothing was picked out that would be fitting to the trends of those who were "eye-catchers." Little did I know that my solid attempts made me even more unrecognizable than before, because now I was wearing what every other girl was wearing; still, in a bouquet of roses, I was the baby's breath. Now, many years later, I am sitting here, still introspective, concerning myself with the fact that once I let someone else's label of me define me; it is sad how influenceable little girls can be. Signed, Yours truly, Jane.

Reviews

[Robyn]

You've managed to capture a character very well in so few words. There is so much truth and sadness in that second last sentence. I like the conflict the character has: trying to stand out but at the same time fit in, it's hard to find that balance. Great piece.

[Lisa]

I love this one. As a fellow "plain Jane" I can relate very well. I'm amazed that you were able to get all that into just six sentences. I'm impressed. Very well done!! Good descriptive words. Everything illustrates perfectly in this story. Very well written.!!