Give me A Chance,Please..??

its about a shrieking of a female fetus who wish to see her next morning

Do you feel ashamed to giving birth an angel of bliss?

So what do you feel you are cursed with this female infant.

Then what do you feel,

 for which you wish to flush me out from your  womb.

I was in a hope to see you, to see the rays of Sun.

But why you wish to abort me instead of giving a warm hug.

I want to see the world,

I too wish to enjoy my life which is not yet started,

But I feel the existence of a life  with-in me.

I have a dream to come to your lap.

But before I woke up from my dream,

Before I feel and enjoy my life, why do you want to finish it?

I thought that, this womb is the safest place in the world,

But it’s a slaughter for female infant.

I thought that Mummy is the best safeguard

But here mummy too supports to make mummies of infant.

Am I  a cause of any sin, for the whole world?

Am I a cause of any curse, for you?

Am I sign of any sigh for you all?

Then why do you want to flush me out before, I breath,

And before, I feel the existence of my life in your lap.

I am nothing but a child of a dove heart,

And a blessing of god only.

I want to live, don’t flush me out from your womb,

Only, because, I’m female in gender.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Imara]

"But it’s a slaughter for female infant." Infant should be plural or it should be 'a female infant'
The word 'mummy' should not be capitalized and if you choose to capitalize it then you should do so consistently. In one line toward the end the M is capitalized and in the very next line it isn't.
"But here mummy too supports to make mummies of infant." Clever line! Very nice word play but in order for you not to confuse the reader this needs to be fixed grammatically. An should go in front of infant.
"And a blessing of god only." god should be God.
Ok now what I am done with editing I can give you the praise you deserve for this piece. I can feel the passion that you have for this topic and I would love to read and review a counter poem from you from the eyes of the mother who is giving up her child. The meaning that I took from this poem is about China and other Asian countries where females are frowned upon and in more conservative areas are not valued and are sold, or killed very young. Very powerful, needs some corrections but overall nice job :)

[Pleasure_Believe in you..]

please don't kill the infants because they are female in gender. save baby girl.