For Eleanor

A poem for the girl who has stolen my heart.

You came into my life
and without the when or why-
you took away my strife.
You made me feel I could fly.

I didn't intend to fall for you.
I was simply trying to forget
that my heart, damaged, felt so blue
from mistake after error and regret.

I cannot put it into wording,
how much you mean to me
and how every day I'm filled with yearning
for a message a day- to fill me with glee.

My darling girl to me this is new,
an intense and incredible thing.
I know without doubt that I love you
so much that I want to sing.

You came into my life, Hun,
and your love fills me with hope.
You, who shines as bright as the sun-
I love you. Love, your dope.

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar issues as I am writing on my phone. This was a spur of the moment poem and isn't entirely polished but it is however my raw emotion and I'm proud of it all the same.

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice poem. Slippery flow leads the reader all the way to the end fast. Tyfs

[Kirsty Hignett]

Thankyou for taking the time to read! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I definitely enjoyed writing it- and I agree, the flow of the poem does get you to the end fairly promptly- which is quite fitting given it was written for someone! ☺️

[Rose]

This is a very lovely poem ❤️

[Kirsty Hignett]

Thankyou ☺️ Im glad you enjoyed it!