"Darkness has come"

"You will know when it has arrived...The darkness will swallow everything...And leave no ounce of anything..

Darkness sweeping in,
Falling around me,
Working my ways towards the void of unforseen dreams,
My nightmares brewing,
Closing around my forgotten soul,
Will you remember me,
Will you weep for this loss,
Or will you just pass this on as nothing,
You have been my life,
I will never forget you as the darkness kills me,
Your memory is what keeps me alive,
This darkness may only be the beginning,
But my hope will be the end...
 

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

wow awesome poem!!!

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so much turmoil in these lines
I can feel the depth of the love, loss and pain through out
Great write!

I have to say this is my favorite part

"This darkness may only be the beginning,
But my hope will be the end..."

only b/c I can relate SO well to it...