"Fixatioin on darkness"

death is what one sees after stepping through the glass of darkness..

Chaos,

Ringing aloudly in my heart and soul,
An inner fight of consciousness and insanity,
Two parts fighting to be one,
I have lost what has kept me sane,
I am loosing my sanity day by day,
Nothing can bring me back now,
Not out of this hole that i have dug,
My life,
No longer of importance to me,
Nor to anyone,
This hole i have dug,
Will soon be my grave,
My life worthless,
Nothing i have ever done,
Could have gotten me ready for this,
For the break in the strands,
That set this off,
My heart is torn,
My soul is corrupt,
I can' hurt anymore,
Not after this,
And you would be happy.....

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

yep, certainly something I think weve all felt;) Hah, why the smiley face then? Cause its great to capture something so clearly, that the readers first instinct is to say yeah, I totally get that.

Should first word be Chaos though?

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I have felt this a time or two
this is really powerful, great write