"Confessions"

To confess is to empty your heart to another

Death rings through my bones,
I have lost so much,
I have gained so little,
As my time grows short,
So doesth my whims,
All I have ever wanted is to be by your side,
All I ever wish is to be with you,
To hold you,
To care for you,
Without you i would break,
Without you I would shatter,
This is my confession to you,
This is my confession to he world,
I want no one else,
Through the void I may go,
Through the shadows I will conquer,
Through time i will float,
With only your memory to guide me.....

Reviews

[SM Davis]

So doesth my whims,
I think you mean "doth"...this line stands out not just for the misspelling but because the word doth doesn't match the rest of the poem. It is an old english word but your poem isn't written in the old language. That's the only thing I would suggest .... the rest is very nicely done.

[Habibah]

Wonderful confession... I love the last few lines... "Through the shadows I will conquer, Through time i will float, With only your memory to guide me." Deeply moved by it. Great work.

[dawrita]

wow if only we could find people we trust enough to confess to. that was beautiful. "without you i would shatter" thats what you call love. thanks for reading regrds to kelly!