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I know some of these may look like I had a perpose behind them but really I didn't just wrote them out of no where

-Unknown-

The forest smells crisp and wet
The rain fall is slow and steady
My breathing calm yet fast
The rain falling on my face
Masking my tears
Masking the pain I feel inside
All the words you say repeat over and over in my head
The pounding of thoughts sends my body, my legs into a run
I run faster and faster trying to get away from the thoughts of pain
I trip and fall, my breathing faster and heavy now
I dare not look back in fear the pain and past will catch me
Forcing my body up I walk away
Silent and Broken

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I really loved this piece of writing a lot, this one is really so deep
I also loved its flow too, it is very appealing to the reader.
Overall, a great write it is....Very well penned!
Keep writing...

[Kirill Zeinon]

Hmmm.. Thank you very much..

[Bexers]

I had a very surreal image of a beautiful forest wet with dew from the previous day as I read this poem. I think you did a wondeful job!