Go to pray.

Go to pray.

A Poem by Kiri J

 Come sit by me

can you see the stars are so much brighter here?

come sit by me

and breathe...

breathe in, breathe in, breathe out...

come sit by me

and take my hand before we sink into the sand

you are lovelier than you know.

you are my stars, you are my sand, you are my air

and wherever you go i will be there

always

and wherever you rest, there i will stay

always.

you are where i go to pray,

you are where i go to pray.

© 2009 Kiri J


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Soft tender words of prayer! The way you used your words was so tender and beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good descriptive poem. You did really well to encourage the reader. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ahhhhhhhhh...so soothing and beautiful ! a truly LOVEly piece this

Posted 14 Years Ago


Bravo Bravo

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow Very lovely Poem so Beautiful you about had me in tears Beautiful words.

i love all the lines but i keep reading these Linesbreathe in, breathe in, breathe out...

come sit by me

and take my hand before we sink into the sand


you are lovelier than you know.


then this one i love you are my stars, you are my sand, you are my air

and wherever you go i will be there

always

and wherever you rest, there i will stay

always.

you are where i go to pray,

you are where i go to pray.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Kiri, this was beautiful.

Wonderful writing!
Antonio

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poem is beautiful. The movement and words made this a positive and hopeful poem. A offer to pray with another is a kind gift. A excellent poem. Thank you.

Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Foo on the review below...I really like this. Perhaps they have nowhere to go to pray.

Keep up the good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The grammar could use some work, for sure, bur overall I guess it works.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Kiri J
Kiri J

Melbourne, Australia



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I'm 22, Australian. I love music by the likes of Tori Amos, Imogen Heap, Regina Spektor, Sia, Amy Winehouse... Jeff Buckley, DCAB. I am a writer. I love rainy Sinatra-Sundays. I don't talk when I have.. more..

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