Who cares?

Who cares?

A Story by Kirbyfactor
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A story about little Suzy and Tommy.

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Who cares?
Everyone cares about Timmy, Timmy scored 3 touchdowns in a single game.
Everyone cares about Mcgee, Mcgee won the spelling bee.
Everyone cares about Jack, Jack likes to go out and get drunk in his weekends.
No one cares about Suzy, Suzy was raped and is now pregnant.
Everyone in the class is whispering that Suzy is a s**t, even her mother says so.
Suzy can't take it anymore, Suzy took too many pills and is now lifeless in the bathtub.

Everyone cares about Suzy now, she commited suicide, everyone who hated Suzy now feels sorry.
Everyone who did not care showed up at her funeral, except for Tommy.
Tommy secretly liked Suzy, but was too afraid of telling her because he was afraid.
Now that Suzy is gone Tommy feels like he is all alone.
Tommy and Suzy have one thing in commen, both took pills.



Sorry to break character, but if you ever find yourself in a situation like this, make sure you seek help, no matter what, there will always be someone who cares about you.
If you don't believe me, just know that I care.

© 2013 Kirbyfactor


Author's Note

Kirbyfactor
Sorry for such a depressing story, but I really felt the need to get this point across.

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It's human nature to think well of the dead as a way of correcting all the guilt related to their demise. This story should have people thinking twice before hurting someone else’s feelings.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow .. this is really sad ..



Posted 11 Years Ago



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